One thing that bothers me is the use of 'Allah'. If this was meant to be originally written in Arabic and translated into English, 'Allah' should have been translated into 'God'. If meant to be originally written in English, 'God' would have been written instead of 'Allah'. It's the arabic word for God, not an Islam-specific name. Arabic-speaking Christians call God, Allah.
Otherwise I like it. I like the idea that someone would free him before researching what they hold.